Monday, 26 September 2011

Through the Tunnel

The  main character
The main character is Jerry an English boy. He was 11 years old  when the story took place.  He likes swimming and going to the  beach. He likes leaving the house without his mother's premission. He was jelous with the older boys.
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3 comments:

  1. Tadeus Nafuka26 September 2011 at 03:16

    you did well at this part. I gave you ten out of ten

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  2. yvonne29 September 2011 at 00:13

    it is great that you have aimed for the maximum 15 sentences and for that i would give you a ten.job well done!

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  3. happiness4 October 2011 at 01:17

    very good. 8/10

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