The plot
The story begin when Jerry the main character and his mother who was a widow went to the beach during one holiday.The went to the beach to have fun together and sunbathing as well.Jerry likes swimming and he feel excited to go swimming.The first day at the beach,Jerrry overswarm,he looked exhausted,weak and dizzy.The next day his mother confirm that the next morning they skould go together but Jerry refused,but because his mother insisted he later agreed.At the beach he excirsed his lungs as if every part of his body depend on them.That night he was bleeding through the nose.In another four days his mother talked about going home.Two days before they leave the beach,Jerry went to swim without his mother knowing it.Things turn around when he wanted to dig a hole for himself.His nose started bleeding again while he was under water.When he went back home he was hidding and never wanted his mother to notice wkat happened but it did not work out because her mother find out.
well done again!! here are your ten marks for this part, i didn't see any mistake in you work
ReplyDeleteThat was a good summary,very intresting!9 marks is what you deserve.
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